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Destroyed

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Can I make you my baby?
I ask terrified.
The thought of your response...
makes me anxious inside.

If we do the unthinkable?
I whisper in your ear.
Yet you turn away...
you refuse to hear.

Your lips speak of cherishing
loving and a rescue.
But who will rescue me?

My soul seeming to drain
at the reply that you give.
I went out on a limb!
I gave you my heart!
I spoke with my lips...
Thought stopping me yet I persist.

This is what I get?
For the love.. I am lost.
I fall endlessly
my heart shattering tenderly.

My hearts destroyed
and my life means no more.

Tears escaping...
I cry shaking the heavens.
My soul is crippled.
I am loved?
I am no more...


Destroyed!
Read my journal to see how this came about.

It describes every thing I feel in exact detail {so does this song}. And now I'm hurting -_-

I haven't slept last night and I know I should but I can't. I just want to write forever.

Listening to Alicia Keys 'Un-thinkable 'I'm Ready' [link] which is on repeat.

Such a beautiful song. Please take a listen...




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Copyright(C)2010 Y. Tonell
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ShiguneMatsui297's avatar
I love it! It's deep, emotional, exactly what I LOVE! You're missing some commas, but overall, your work is great!